This semester I am taking my first creative writing class at The College of New Jersey.
I've always been interested in creative writing and have been writing stuff for many years. Instead of sharing a piece of my (bad) writing with everyone, I thought I'd update about what happened yesterday...
I went to my teacher's office to discuss my latest assignment. For the assignment, we had to write about "solitude and understanding the mystery of life."
Naturally, I wrote about an overweight girl dancing in the middle of the street.
He called me to his office and I have illustrated the events of this meeting...
SO my tragic story about Cvalda dancing in the middle of the street until the sun goes down now looks like this.
And it's probably better now.
5 comments:
Damn Nicky, that's a rather sad story. Maybe your should try erotica, might be your niche and you just haven't tried it yet. Get rid of the girls and stick with what you know. ;-)
I'm sure your story wasn't *that* bad. And I certainly hope your professor wasn't that harsh.
Was your story anything like this?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-xzIdICC9ws
Maybe it's for the best...
Haha. No Michelle, it wasn't quite like that.
Actually, it was about a really quiet, deserted street and the girl walked to the center of it and starts dancing. It's told from the POV of a girl in the neighborhood who sees her from her window.
As for that YouTube vid, you gotta admit the gay men part was funny.
I saw your xtube picture, and would like to hook up some time. I'm African-American and looking for some white chocolate flava.
blckd1ck3771@yahoo.com
msg me ;D
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